Some pieces of writing rush past their best moments without even realising it. Others slow the reader down at exactly the right point and suddenly everything feels more intense, more deliberate, more controlled.
The short video below looks at a small structural move that strong writers use to shape pace and tension without overwriting. It’s quick, subtle, and incredibly effective when used well. Watch it once, and you’ll start noticing where your own writing could hit harder with less effort.
One of the simplest ways to level up creative writing in GCSE English Language Paper 1 is by controlling paragraph length.
Most students write in long, even blocks, which flattens tension and makes moments blend together.
The idea: use a one-sentence paragraph at key moments to shift the rhythm and focus the reader's attention.
Example: "And then, silence."
Or: "It was watching me."
Placed at the right moment, a single-sentence paragraph slows the reader down and makes the line feel more dramatic. It creates space, tension, and emphasis without relying on extra description.
This technique is especially effective for suspense, fear, and turning points. Instead of piling on adjectives, you let structure do the work.
GCSE examiners reward deliberate structural choices in Q5 writing. A well-placed short paragraph shows control over pacing and tone.
Because so few students use this technique effectively, it stands out immediately when it is done well.