The Habit That Drains Marks - Summarising Not Analysing

Rehashing the story is wasted effort - examiners know the plot inside and out, what they want is analysis. Telling the story just shows you have a good memory, analysing shows you understand what's actually happening.

This video breaks down the mistake with an example and tells you what to focus on instead.

No more 'story time', instead get into the nitty gritty.

Common Mistake - Summarising Instead of Analysing

The mistake: spending half your answer retelling the story rather than analysing how and why the writer creates meaning.

Weak example (summary):
"The Inspector tells the family they are responsible for Eva's death."

Better example (analysis):
"The Inspector's speech in An Inspector Calls highlights social responsibility by acting as Priestley's moral mouthpiece, forcing both the characters and the audience to confront collective guilt."

Why This Destroys Marks

GCSE English is not about telling the story. It is about breaking the text down, exploring deeper meanings, themes, and techniques.

If your answer sounds like a plot recap, you will be capped at lower marks because you are not showing how the writer constructs meaning.

Quick Recap

  • Summary = retelling the story.
  • Analysis = explaining how and why meaning is created.
  • Always focus on writer's methods, not just what happens.

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