You can write the prettiest paragraph on earth, but if it dodges the question’s keywords, your marks will suffer. Examiners aren’t just judging your ideas, they’re checking whether you’re answering the actual question they asked.
This video gives you an example of how 'not to' answer a question - showing what's missed and what you need to look out for to give you the best chance of getting marks.
Precision is the game! Wanna play?
The hidden mistake: ignoring the question's keywords.
You write a decent answer, but it completely misses what the question is actually asking. Instead of answering precisely, you go off on a general tangent.
Example question: "How does Shakespeare present Macbeth as a complex character?"
You: "Macbeth is a brave warrior but later becomes evil."
Examiner: "Okay, but where is the complex part?"
Examiners look for precision. If you do not address the key words in the question (for example, complex character), you will not hit the assessment objectives that give you top marks.
Your job is not just to talk about the text - it's to answer the exact question on the page, using those key words to shape every part of your paragraph.